Some people believe that nowadays we have to many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
It is true that there are dozens of options for us to choose in various things in the modern world. While I agree that we are still insufficient choices in variety of things, I believe that we already have more than enough selection.
On the one hand, I would say individuals have enough choices or not are all depends on the situation, where they live and their financial ability. For instance, Business men always consider to start a business in terms of location and population. People who live in the rural area actually do not get too many choices on cuisines or brands to choose due to the population density is low compare to cities. In addition, people who are not wealthy do not have as many options as rich people, the money they have can only use in the essential way instead of spending on the food and products they are fancy.
However, I agree that people do have a lot of alternatives these days. TV programmes and films for example, owing to technology advances, directors can use high level equipment to film the action and animation movies, editors and special effect designers does the awesome jobs via well-equipment computer software. Moreover, people have multiple choice to decide the type of building they want to live in due to the architects can build a lot of skyscrapers, people are no longer have one choice which is house, they can choose to live in flats. Furthermore, people can readily buy clothing which made from other country due to the fact most companies are doing worldwide business nowadays.
In conclusion, while some people may think it is not enough choice for them because of a lot of elements, my opinion is there are sufficient option for people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 579, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
... flats. Furthermore, people can readily buy clothing which made from other country ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75675675676 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58177965642 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.6672442872 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3636363636 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233902828196 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908736760508 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716670815199 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138083716753 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300535258326 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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