The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of the continued rise?
Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity.
In this 21st century, the human population has been booming at a rapid rate, which is the greatest problem faced by the humanity at this time - it is the issue of debate for the world. In this essay I will discuss the reasons of this problem and agreement upon effects.
On one hand, presently, the technology has been being accelirated rapidly and is developed to much in medical sector vis-á-vis other fields, an account of that, many advanced technologies introduced in medical sector, due to that. the life expectancy is raised and better quality of foods as well, which are consumed by the individuals on daily basis and obtain vitamins, which assist to keep body healthy and increase the years of life. For an instance, one of the european countries - Russia, which is preeminent for its advanced medical field, where owing to that, the life expectancy is inclined and the death ratio has been falling down, accordingly, the number of citizens is rocketing in most of the nations.
On the other hand, there are plethora of problems, which are faced by humanity in whole world by the reason of increasing inhabitants. One of the biggest problem is difficult is to feed the public; increasing the ratio of unemployment and uneducatedness and poverty in many of the nations. For an example, one of the countries - Africa, where poverty is the hazardous issue because of the high residence, where 12 - 15 members in one family and one person earns for family to fulfill their needs, accordingly, the issue of starvation is faced by the residents.
To conclude, owing to the advanced technology and medical care is improved not only expectancy is boomed but also death ratio of nation is declined, although, the problem of poverty, unemployment and starvation are faced by humanity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76145781033 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503333333333 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5695192871 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.0 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3333333333 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155909629672 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767415110094 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101921687846 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112375361115 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099036401149 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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