Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases people being monitored unaware that this is happening.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In this contemporary era, the technology has been booming at a rapid rate. On account of that many technical gizmos are introduced : cell phone tracking; security cameras, which assist to monitor the current status of individuals, what they are saying and doing also where they are, although, in most of the cases human beings are unaware about that this is happening. The pros of this development outweigh the cons.
To embark with, in the life of people, the vital role has been being played by the technology because it makes the life easier compared to the past and developed in all fields : smart classes for students; new laser techniques for medical operations also in the cyber sector, which helps to not only find the location of history sheeters but also decline the crime rate, which are related to cyber. For an example, owing to the technology one of the smallest tracking chip is produced, GPS - Global positioning system, which helps to track the current situation of the mobiles and vehicles as well, from last few years the stealing cases are decreased in most of the countries.
In addition, there are many other advantages of the development of technical gadgets like cell phone tracker, CCTV - Closed Circuit Television, which keeps a watch of the humans, all gizmos are extremely benevolent. A boss can see the modus operandi of the mankind, who are working in a company as employees also it makes a work of police is easier. For and instance one of the asian countries - India, where author applied cameras upon roads to keep time lapse as long as anyone drive a bike without helmet, car without seatbelt, it provides e memo (electric memo) to all those people, who made these types of mistakes.
To conclude, through GPS - Global positioning system individuals can track current location of automobile and offenders by cell phone tracking also keep a watch by CCTV cameras, which are known as a video surveillance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 481, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'drives'.
Suggestion: drives
...ds to keep time lapse as long as anyone drive a bike without helmet, car without seat...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92966360856 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59493171539 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584097859327 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.027017288 49.4020404114 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.111111111 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.3333333333 20.7667163134 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218663614528 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835269851092 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739982706756 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130428637136 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971694532082 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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