The consumption of the world's resources ( oil, and water, etc) is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are causes and solutions?
It is true that the natural resources such as oil and water are overconsumption at an alarming level. There are several reasons for this trend and this issue should be tackled immediately by the government and public.
There are two main reasons for the strong increase in the the consumption of fossil fuels. Firstly, oil and gas are the necessary fuels to transmit goods and people in the modern world. The emission of carbon hydrate from these vehicles has contributed to climate change and greenhouse effect, detrimental to the health of people in the bustling cities. Secondly, the expenditure of researching and investing in renewable energy such as solar power, wind power costs a great deal of money. For example, the price of solar-powered cars are tripled more expensive than the price of cars that use fossil fuel to run.
There are two solutions to tackle the overconsumption of natural fuels. The first solution is the governments should increase taxation on the products which consume alot of fossil resources. The price of these products increase, the less consumers buy and use them. The second solution is that environmental organizations should educate residents on a large scale about saving water and electricity when they do not use it. If the natural resources are exploited reasonably, then our posterity will have enough energy to construct and transmit.
In conclusion, the world's energy resources are vitally important to boost the economy and society so the governments should support the use of alternative energy sources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20717131474 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8557428765 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585657370518 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3134562829 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.538461538 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164096453899 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563606250323 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574454396541 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926648082278 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254514890384 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.