TPO41: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
While society is developing and going on toward modernization, some rules and jobs get more respects and become more valuable and some other parts of jobs lose their previous value and respect among people. And I think teaching belongs to the second group. So I agree that teachers were more appreciated in the past for two reasons.
To begin with, I think the expectations of students and families changed and increased in the wrong way. Some parents think teachers are responsible for all aspects of raising their children while they don't trust them completely. for instance, they can't stand any rational punishment like homework or study a little more. And also they think their children are all innocent and every mistake is the teachers' fault. My mother is a teacher and every day, she should discuss all her time with parents that are misunderstood and angry because of some lies that their children told them. While they should behave respectfully and ask teachers to hear their sides of view.
Moreover, the relationship between teachers and students changed. Students feel more comfortable in class and even in private with their teachers and in other words, they became friends. This is not bad until the students forget their places as students and cross the line. It can turn the friendship space between them into a respectless relationship that is harmful to everyone.
Finally, some wrong approaches and behaviors from a few teachers made a negative perspective among parents and students. Of course, no one can deny these, but we should expand it to all teachers. We should detect these misbehavior and prevent them.
As a result of the above points, teachers get less appreciated by students, families and all in all, from society. But I think generally teaching is a valuable and rewarding job that affects straightly on the behaviors of people and It should back to its place and get more respect. So teachers will feel this respect and try harder to educate children in the right way, and we will have a better society.
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...ust them completely. for instance, they cant stand any rational punishment like home...
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...nd it to all teachers. We should detect these misbehavior and prevent them. As a result of the...
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...ect these misbehavior and prevent them. As a result of the above points, teacher...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, moreover, second, so, while, for instance, i think, of course, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96511627907 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58445764307 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537790697674 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.511841207 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8947368421 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1052631579 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176214978955 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569359673592 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722697477545 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950135185942 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646074383249 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.