in some countries, Owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
It is true that many people today value owing their own house over renting. This essay aims to mention causes for this issue, and I personally believe that this trend could bring disadvantageous impacts for those who have a hope to own a house.
On the one hand, people as human being have wanted to possess their house in search of stability and respect. People who have a fear of changes would likely own their house rather than renting one which does not help them have a stable life. The possession of a property as an intellectual investment has helped people boost their incomes as well as decrease the dependence of fixed salaries from their employments. As a result, householders who have lived in multi-generational families would avoid moving their accommodations periodically when they have their own houses to occupy. Moreover, possessing a house would help people feel respected. a house acts as the pride of it's owner, people who own a home have actually worked hard enough to be capable of purchasing a house and thus enhance their social standing.
nevertheless, homeownership is a negative trend as it forces unrealistic expectations on millions. Most people who have lived in city apartments with rents are not capable of buying a house. The pressure of possessing one is likely to engender the delined quality of life which can cause health problems such as lungs-related disease and mental impact. This is because the obsession of buying homes makes people try to cut off their expenses in order to save money for possessing their own houses. In addition, save money to afford to buy homes will make people lost a lifetime of the investment. Houses costing a huge amount of money would take people a long time to save enough monetary budget to purchase these homes and thus there would not a wise decision of saving money and refusing investments.
In conclusion, owning a house is innately desirable but in the end causes more harm than beneficial due to the pressure it places on individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 648, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...house would help people feel respected. a house acts as the pride of its owner, p...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nevertheless
... thus enhance their social standing. nevertheless, homeownership is a negative trend as i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91812865497 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79897727637 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6462243702 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.133333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163509170615 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616490560771 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434348720323 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103539069654 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543478295106 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.