Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Music is certainly believed to promote cohesion among different age groups and culture origin. I completely agree with this and believe that no other forms of entertainment has this capacity.
To advocates, music transcends the boundaries of nations for it acts as a universal language that connects people of respective cultures together. This is all thanks to the rhythms and melodies of the music which trigger intuitive understanding and sympathy in listeners. In other words, those who do not acquire the language of the music still be able to feel and comprehend the song they are enjoying. To illustrate this, Korean music industry is known to perform very effectively in this area where every song broadcast captures people's fondness due to their appealing and melodious lyrics. For instance, songs that are related to break ups of couples are performed with very painful voices. Hence, Korean songs gain so much favour by people all around the world.
Apart from the melody, music is also competent in bringing the world together owning to its communal activities. Concerts and online forums are considered ideal places for people of mutual music interests, regardless of their age groups and cultural backgrounds. They provide opportunities for the fans to come together and share their knowledge and fondness of the particular genre or singer they are following. Thus, people will be able to make more friends from different countries and learn more about each other's respective traditions.
In conclusion. there are many ways that music brings people together irrespective of their age and culture origins. Hence, I strongly believe that music has achieved optimum success in promoting global harmony.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...espective traditions. In conclusion. there are many ways that music brings people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, still, thus, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33823529412 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69972124666 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613970588235 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9339041054 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313007908774 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986981748245 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805348032242 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19783266941 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337156724798 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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