You are organising a local committee meeting. You would like a local MP to attend the meeting to contribute to a discussion about green areas in the community.
Write a letter of invitation to the MP's secretary, Mrs Shelton. In your letter
• introduce your committee
• say why you are having the meeting
• invite the MP to attend
HELLO MRS SHELTON,
I AM WRITING THIS LETTER TO DRAW YOUR ATTENTION TOWARDS OUR COMMITTEE NAMED SUSTAINABLE GLOBAL WHICH WORKS FOR PLANTING TREES IN DIFFERENT AREAS.WE HAVE A TARGET TO PLANT 10 TREES IN A SINGLE DAY.OUR COMMITTEE HAVE TWELVE MEMBERS.
ACTUALLY, WE ALL ARE DECIDE TO HELD A MEETING FOR THE DISCUSSION ABOUT THE PLANTATION IN THE SLUM AREA NEAR YAMUNA COLONY ,DELHI.BECAUSE IN THAT AREA THERE IS HARDLY ANY GREEN AREA TO FILTER THE POLLUTED AIR.ADDITIONALLY , THAT AREA IS ALREADY COMES UNDER RED ZONE OF POLLUTION. SO THERE IS HIGHLY NEED OF PLANTS AND TREES THERE.THESE PEOPLE ALSO DESERVE FRESH AIR.SUBSEQUENTLY, IT WILL ALSO HELP IN CLEANING AND MAINTAINING THAT AREA.
AND WE ALL WANTS TO INVITE M.P OF YOUR PARTY FOR THIS MEETING SO THAT THEY CAN HELP US IN THIS NOBLE DEED.WE HEARTLY WANTS HIM TO JOIN OUR MEETING.
WE WILL WAIT FOR YOU.
THANKS
YOUR SINCERELY
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
HELLO MRS SHELTON, I AM WRITING THIS LETTER TO DRAW YOUR AT...
^^^
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...TION IN THE SLUM AREA NEAR YAMUNA COLONY ,DELHI.BECAUSE IN THAT AREA THERE IS HARD...
^^
Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... TO FILTER THE POLLUTED AIR.ADDITIONALLY , THAT AREA IS ALREADY COMES UNDER RED ZO...
^^
Line 4, column 12, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'WE' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: Want
... AND MAINTAINING THAT AREA. AND WE ALL WANTS TO INVITE M.P OF YOUR PARTY FOR THIS ME...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 29, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: P
...HAT AREA. AND WE ALL WANTS TO INVITE M.P OF YOUR PARTY FOR THIS MEETING SO THAT ...
^
Line 4, column 117, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'WE' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: Want
...N HELP US IN THIS NOBLE DEED.WE HEARTLY WANTS HIM TO JOIN OUR MEETING. WE WILL WAIT ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...LL WAIT FOR YOU. THANKS YOUR SINCERELY
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90066225166 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77961888816 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682119205298 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.6249912868 44.8134815571 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 76.5299724578 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 16.8248392259 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193570654905 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865570724209 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357251886453 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888527632003 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111839949835 0.0580467560999 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 7.59969072165 133% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.