Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women.
What is your opinion?
Equality is such a vague word to use for men and women, especially to distinguish how each one will be categorized or branded as suitable for certain jobs.
Honestly, I don’t believe that men and women are equal. Because they definitely are not. Men and women were not made to mimic each other, but instead were made to complement each. However, just because this fact exists doesn’t mean that they should not be given equal opportunities in terms of profession. Men and women should be able to do any job they want and should not be treated with any form of discrimination during the hiring process and in the workplace for already securing a certain job.
One good example of this would be promotions that are given to men just because of their gender, since there are still people who exercise this kind of mindset, that men are the superior sex. Job suitability, I believe, is about one's experience and knowledge of the field and nothing to do with one’s gender. Performance and excellence in a certain career has a lot to do with one’s passion and dedication, whether it is a desk job or something that has to do with hard labor.
Men and women are definitely not the same in so many aspects, especially when it comes to physical attributes, but just because men and women are different doesn’t mean they should be discriminated against for certain jobs. Men and women should be given equal opportunities and should be treated fairly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t believe that men and women are equal. Because they definitely are not. Men and women ...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'peopled'.
Suggestion: peopled
... of their gender, since there are still people who exercise this kind of mindset, that...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...x. Job suitability, I believe, is about ones experience and knowledge of the field a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, however, if, so, still, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77470355731 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66515733713 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513833992095 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8872013203 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.818181818 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.496263877994 0.244688304435 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199910527356 0.084324248473 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132300776727 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313324585717 0.151304729494 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132780305798 0.056905535591 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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