In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?
The declining quality of air and water is quite a big issue for developing countries and one of the major contributors to this are the industry and construction.
For developing countries, such as the Philippines, their major priority is to provide for their citizens on a very tight budget. They aim to utilize their resources for projects that benefit a larger group of people and since the budget is so small for the population, they tend to prioritize the people over the environment, without a single thought about the health of mother earth and how it will affect the health and overall wellbeing of their residents.
What they can do about this is assess the overall quality of the air and water in their country. Afterwhich, they should publish a study about the negative effects of the poor quality of air they breathe and water they drink on their health, not just to create awareness but to create a cause for concern. If there’s one thing I’ve learned living in a developing country, it is that the majority of its people do not care about the environment unless whatever is happening to it directly affects them and their families. After creating a bit of a stir, they can now enact laws to make the industry and construction more accountable for the waste that they emit into the air and water. They must also impose stricter sanctions for non-compliance and implement these without bias to all businesses, whether it is a small company or a multinational corporation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'assessed'.
Suggestion: assessed
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Line 5, column 341, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to live'.
Suggestion: to live
...cern. If there’s one thing I’ve learned living in a developing country, it is that the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83984375 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7661739171 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1587815411 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.875 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142880797816 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869688455499 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968864459843 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142780729305 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114518989958 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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