Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are becoming more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The internet is one of the most astounding human inventions. It gives people the privilege of contacting whoever they want at the touch of their fingers and enables them to receive a response within seconds.
The pros and cons of the internet have long been debated about. Whether it is an invention that helps or scars relationships. On one hand, it does bring people closer together. An example of this would be children, parents, or partners living in different countries or locations that are not easily accessible by a short commute or drive; who instead of the traditional writing or phone call, are now able to communicate through video calls and keep their relationships alive. Distance, which originally has driven people, especially families, apart has now become a minute obstacle for long distance relationships.
However, on the other side, despite the close physical proximity, they are driven apart by the internet - more specifically, by social media. Social media is a platform genre that utilizes the internet, which enables people to update large groups of people with minimal effort. Along with this also came the digital forms of affirmation called “likes” and “reacts”, which people can give to one’s social media update. This has created a need for our generation of young adults and adolescents to allocate most or their time to cater to their social media communities in order for them to gain “likes” and positive “reacts” instead of nurturing real life relationships with their family and friends. Although some people are able to balance their real life relationships and their virtual ones, nowadays, a lot of people are not. In extreme cases, people just cater to their virtual relationship and this has driven them to isolation.
In my opinion, I believe that the internet is such a wonderful tool. It has enabled us to perform several different tasks that originally we thought would be impossible. I believe that it’s just a matter of proper education, not just for the youth, but for each and everyone. That the internet has so much to offer, that too much of anything won’t do anyone any good, which is why we have to learn how to balance its use.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...rful tool. It has enabled us to perform several different tasks that originally we thought would ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05191256831 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75126921417 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565573770492 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0712485065 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.764705882 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5294117647 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88235294118 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196568125228 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654559860602 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610515448665 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102031038424 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580023266312 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.