The plans below show the layout of a university s sports center now and how it will look after redevelopment Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The given maps predict the future layout renovations of a presently existing University sports center.

Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the original design will not undergo any changes with regard to the front end of the building, however, either side of the center has been planned to be extended to introduce additional facilities, leisure activities, and refreshment areas.

According to the given illustration, the currently build reception center at the entrance with a pool to its North, changing room, and respected seating plan besides the pool will remain unchanged. However, the two outdoor courts to the East and West side of the center will get demolished.

Furthermore, the left of the center is planned to be reconstructed to develop a new sports hall. Also, the extension of the gym located to the North will be extended east side leading to two new adjoining dance studios. To the rightmost corner at the bottom, a changing room with an adjacent refreshing cafe is under the plan. In addition, to the West of the reception, the court will be replaced in favor of a leisure pool with an attached changing room. Just to the left of the entrance, a sports shop will also be laid.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ed to be reconstructed to develop a new sports hall. Also, the extension of the gym lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, look, so, in addition, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9806763285 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75438585929 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56038647343 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.41341529 43.030603864 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.555555556 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150282510846 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707789866395 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380822475824 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103038200001 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258334286988 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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