Critical judgment of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who is an expert in that field.
The value to the work is given when it is judged by the person who excels in that field. I agree with the claim, it is true that an expert in the particular field may judge the work as he would be well versed in that field and can easily identify the pros and cons of the work.
One thing which i experienced personally in my college days is that when i submitted my thesis work on a project related to Cardiology department, i reported the final copy based on it to my professor who monitors me during project to suggest me if any corrections . She did not make any corrections and returned me as such but when i gave to the head of the department i was surprised when i found many red marks on my copy. He told me all my mistakes and corrected me. As he was a perfectionist than my professor he helped me and i scored good marks.
The other example which i came across is my brother published an article on his own without help from anyone. It was really a good article related to biomarker but as he published it without any professor's name it was not approved by many. Later he republished the article again with the help of a doctor who is excelled in research work and his article was approved to be published. He was praised by all his college faculty regarding his work.
I partially disagree with the claim as for instance in a company an empyolee may have more knowledge when compared to his boss . All the work in a company is done by the employees and the boss just allot them work who might not be knowing about it but the work would be approved.
With the certain examples explained above i conclude by saying that i most agree with the claim which states that a judgement to a work given by a person who excels in that particular field is more acceptable and applauded.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, regarding, so, well, as for, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 338.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28698224852 5.05705443957 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50746118448 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470414201183 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8668155136 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.461538462 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204613450563 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832465024336 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899396222197 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135682989193 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103479803942 0.0667264976115 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 48.8420337079 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 12.1639044944 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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