The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing.
What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society?
How can this problem be solved?
nowadays, people around the world are facing the crucial situation of health problems. overweight is one of them and now being a big issue especially for millenials. the causes and how to solve these problems will be explained below.
finally, many people consume much kind of of unhealthy food in different way. it is because it served faster than the common ones. everyone can get them by just sitting on the couch and using phone to order. for example, restorants in huge cities provide their cuisines as dine in and online delivery. as result, people change the way of life become lazier and refer to fast meals than cooking by themselves. it is clear that unwholesome food now is one of human lifestyle in modern era.
secondly, live in central city means 24-hour-work is possible. that brings up to citizens more busy to their occupations and have no time to do exercise. the exact case is for office workers, they spend 8 hours a day in the same place which is mean they do not do exercise enough. according to that, it would cause overweight upon them.
in conclusion, the way of life such as unhealthy eating and less exercise are few of reasons that might people to gain weight more than human bodies needed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71162790698 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45568181463 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66511627907 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1605205685 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.3571428571 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3571428571 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19456032262 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569606086777 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623820210615 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116940910991 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104913899306 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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