Nowadays, older people who need employment have to compete with the young people .What problems does this cause and what are the solutions.
Nowadays, world of working for an adult is a competition between employees as a race to acquire the best position. There is one of the most common issue that older people have believe of rivalry with the younger one in some companies. In this essay, i will explain the causes and what could be done to solve this problem.
In this modern era, the young generation, millenials, have been entered working life. As a youth, with a large population throughout this world. There are spreaded in vary places with diversity of field of occupations. One of the cause of the feeling compete is young people have dexterity and curiosity when they are execute the order or task but older worker conceive theirs as a duty. In other hand, youth enjoys the job more than older. Besides that, youngster knows the sophisticate tecnologies which are expand day by day like a blink of eyes, when the older could not open eyes widely to the advance of tecnology.
One another reason that causing the competition around workers, the young ones, have higher desire and energy. They have ability to stick and solve tasks more considerable. Some older workers do a job as formally to gain salary and not purely because they are get in to it pleasantly.
As a final point, one solution that can be chosen for this issue is provide certain training for necessary skill which is needed by the company or corporation to motivate the old workers to look forward toward the curren development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'executed'.
Suggestion: executed
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'expanded'.
Suggestion: expanded
... the sophisticate tecnologies which are expand day by day like a blink of eyes, when t...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...on that can be chosen for this issue is provide certain training for necessary skill wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78039215686 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51260872688 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603921568627 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4132808114 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7692307692 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290793854126 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863124363874 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677613197827 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150645923546 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726185202197 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.