Nowadays, older people who need employment have to compete with the young people .What problems does this cause and what are the solutions.
Kids nowadays is more competitive to get a job so that makes adults must to try harder for compete with the younger one. In this essay I would explain first the reason that competition is also happening in job world between young and old people. Secondly how to tackle this issue and the end how to solve this problem that will be explain below.
Firstly, in this era it is customary to compete jobs between old and young people it is because many young people have more skills than older. It is due to education has improved better so youngster get a good science. For example, not only studying their also taught field practice to find out the truth condition which their would be facing. As result more and more youth are competent make a lot of older people have a difficult to find employment. It is clear that as a older people must more try harder to deal with the competition.
Secondly, most of the young people have more spirit to get a job and not quitter. It is because young people have fresh minded and have enticing ideas about new happening. For exact case in millenial era youngster are more domineering to go with the flow and adaptive with situation. Therefore, young people more needed by company than older people because their have more skills. It is obvious that spirit and skills who young people have is a main key who the company wants.
To tackle this issue, as a company must have how expected criterion and ropp off for young and old people categories. In the other side older people also must be adapting with time development.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-09-17 | Maryam42 | 67 | view |
| 2020-09-17 | Dwi Ramadya Risqiana Putri | 56 | view |
| 2020-09-17 | rini pratiwi | 56 | view |
- Nowadays older people who need employment have to compete with the young people What problems does this cause and what are the solutions 56
- Many animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea What are the reasons and solutions to solve this issue 33
- The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society How can this problem be solved 56
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...itive to get a job so that makes adults must to try harder for compete with the younger...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...to find employment. It is clear that as a older people must more try harder to de...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59642857143 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31701503523 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489285714286 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.4376496064 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.8 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350629761623 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134221029296 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082934433724 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22324186763 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654950365136 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.