Personal happiness comes from being successful in life. How far do you agree with this statement?
Some people believe that being successful in life is the fundamental reason for constructing the personal contentment. In my view, my argument can take the form of both agreeing and disagreeing simultaneously.
There are ample elements to make human’s cheerfulness. The most obvious element is achievement what people desire to complete, either at work or at school or within a community. It allows individuals making more earning, getting on well with many helpful relationships, and the satisfaction not only for own them but also for their whole family. Another reason is considered that being successful in life partly eases pressures on other fields, which people have had to face every day. This result is an easier path for individuals to release anxiety and set their mind at rest.
Beside the factors easy to see as mentioned, the numerous other factors also contribute to whether the peaceful in mind plays an indispensable role in human’s life more content. The primary condition is enjoying life. It is defined as a temporary freedom from daily workload pressure by travel, shopping, doing everything people are keen on. If individuals only succeed in some fields of life, but lack of enjoying life around, they can miss a huge amount of opportunities to experience the outside world. According to impermanence law, nothing is forever, meaning any successes will be disappeared one day. In this way, A positive attitude to accept and tackle them is truly necessary when struggle with the failure issues occurring by work, relationships, family, … He/she who are self-controlled enough are the ones, can master perfectly their own negative emotions and evil actions. Whereby, anything which he/she thought and deed will contribute making other gates leading to other successes.
By and large, to some people, successful in life is a truly crucial thing to build human’s happiness, but to others, the peaceful mind can be a top priority. To my knowledge, balancing all of conditions is the best way to construct personal contentment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'temporary freedom'.
Suggestion: temporary freedom
...tion is enjoying life. It is defined as a temporary freedom from daily workload pressure by travel,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, by and large, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22727272727 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95654011922 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5818980409 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8125 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183213747026 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553372969478 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446490477695 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115094993941 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276478060231 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.