You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
Dear Mr Smith,
I am Mr Shreyas Parab, recently moved into your neighbourhood apartment. I work as a Technical Sales Engineer at Pilot Gaskets and Engineers at Andheri. We are a family of four: father, mother and my younger sister. We have kept a small family celebration on Friday, 25th September.
As a part of Hindu tradition, the house warming will start with the Ganesh Pujan by seeking holy blessings from the devotee and followed by the lunch. In the evening our friends and relatives will be visiting the house, we have also arranged for dinner for all the guest. We will be playing holy chants in the day time and then followed by music on the home theatre which might be disturbing to your family. We will make sure that volume is not loud enough to bother you at all.
We would also be glad to invite you to the celebration, it will be very exciting to get to know each other much better and to get introduce with my family members.
Hoping to see you on Friday with your family.
Yours faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ot loud enough to bother you at all. We would also be glad to invite you to the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60752688172 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42790008219 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650537634409 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3891030495 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9090909091 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16223747364 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701130747139 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692890671514 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104547629709 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556717749388 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.