Most of the people think that with the development of modern technology their traditional cultures will be lost. while others think that modern technology and traditional culture are two different aspects. I partially disagree with this statement and my position is justify further.
Many of us believe that the development of technology and traditional culture are two different aspects and incompatible. The foremost reason for support my opinion is that traditional culture is only related to the some of the religion. while technology is related to all over world. There is not any direct connection between two. For example developing some gadgets can not affect the culture.
On the another hand with the developing of technology cultural values is lost. To elaborate further technology can help to improve the lifestyle so the people can forget their traditional culture and moral values of a society can also down. Mobile, as an example can not connect people face to face and in some of celebration people are also not interested to attain while they can direct watch that festival at their home.
To overall, people become more flexible and free so they forget their traditional culture. while some of them are believe that culture and technology are incompatible.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...heir traditional cultures will be lost. while others think that modern technology and...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 267, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'justified'.
Suggestion: justified
... with this statement and my position is justify further. Many of us believe that the...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...ditional culture is only related to the some of the religion. while technology is re...
^^^^
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ditional culture is only related to the some of the religion. while technology is related t...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...ly related to the some of the religion. while technology is related to all over world...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ly related to the some of the religion. while technology is related to all over world...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
... they forget their traditional culture. while some of them are believe that culture a...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
...itional culture. while some of them are believe that culture and technology are incompa...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23300970874 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76218284465 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 176.041082164 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495145631068 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2425321732 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9230769231 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35427914598 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151113794658 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123870279497 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240236766578 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106118432751 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...heir traditional cultures will be lost. while others think that modern technology and...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 267, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'justified'.
Suggestion: justified
... with this statement and my position is justify further. Many of us believe that the...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...ditional culture is only related to the some of the religion. while technology is re...
^^^^
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ditional culture is only related to the some of the religion. while technology is related t...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...ly related to the some of the religion. while technology is related to all over world...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ly related to the some of the religion. while technology is related to all over world...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
... they forget their traditional culture. while some of them are believe that culture a...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
...itional culture. while some of them are believe that culture and technology are incompa...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23300970874 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76218284465 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 176.041082164 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495145631068 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2425321732 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9230769231 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35427914598 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151113794658 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123870279497 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240236766578 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106118432751 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.