There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need
music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the
International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
You should write at least 250 words.
Use your own ideas, knowledge, and experience and support your arguments with examples
and relevant evidence.
For centuries, music has been an indispensable part of human life. With emerging technologies and innovations, numerous types of music forms have gobbled up the modern market. On top of it, With the advent of globalization, a rich blend of traditional and western music has changed the definition of old music to a greater extent. This essay will talk about the efficacy of music in our lives and at the same time the value of encouraging traditional music amid increasing demand for international music.
It is an irrefutable fact that music plays a pivotal role in stabilizing our mental health. The pressure of studies and work has engulfed our minds with a colossal amount of stress. Listening to music or playing any musical instrument act as a stress-buster and calms us while creating a connection with our soul. For instance, many studies have revealed that listening to music can improve academic performance and productivity as well. Hence, we should always embrace the restorative effects of music. Moreover, it opens up vocational channels for those who are less fortunate in studies.
Furthermore, it is commonly seen that people usually get impacted by the western outlook of music. Is it a threat to our existing traditional music? Many people believe that music connects us with our cultural values, and also serves as a medium to keep diverse language treasure alive. But slowly and steadily, western culture is strengthing its roots in the entire world. For example, new musical forms such as jazz, pop, rock, metal, and many more are taking over the music world. Although these innovations train us in mastering a new language, and culture with improved employment ventures in the musical field, still the beauty of classical tunes should not lose its grip.
To conclude, one should never resist new inventions seeing the gains of music, but we should be mindful to not let that overtake the originality of the real form of traditional music so that our upcoming generations can take that ahead as a symbol of nationality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06784660767 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8132253263 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59587020649 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0943381684 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.058823529 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356773557488 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130052526706 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759425617828 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235547353578 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490634156708 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.