Pets should be treated like family members. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion.
Animals and people are created by the God, but they have different from behavior and ability. They can't to think or to solve problems and to speak out with the others. If the God make them with perfectly, so animals and people will be rival each other. Since they have some of weakness, we should threat pets as well as family members.
From my experience, I was addopted some of kitten in my house. Because I care and love them, so I treated them as my children. Having some of kitten is required more responsibility to fed, to cleaned their litterig box, to poured water into water box. Nevertheless, I felt fun to do that. I think that they might know who love them, and they will love back. For instance, my little kitten always follow me wherever I go in the house and they always wait me in back the door if I'm going to someplace. Those are figure out that they love their owner.
Having kittens are given some of advantages, which was to reduce your stress from your work place. When you went back to home with tired face, you opened your door and saw that they would have tried to tell you something they feel with theirs language. It was funny that they acted to spoiled to you. they could approaching you and you might laugh with they do. Another pleasure things, when you played with them, you can used ball and made them to catch the ball. Both of you, doing exercise. Another example to explain that pets will be faith to their master, there are in Japan, when the dog had to wait their master, even though he didn't know that the master was died. Hachiko statue in Japan that show to you for maintain your pets.
In conclusion, I would say that pets should be treated like family members and should be given proper food, shelter and health care. It is our duty as human to take care of them.
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will be rival each other.
will be rival to each other.
we should threat pets as well as family members.
we should treat pets well as family members.
Sentence: If the God make them with perfectly,
Description: The fragment God make them is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, past tense
I was addopted some of kitten in my house.
I adopted some kittens in my house.
my little kitten always follow me
my little kitten always follows me
Sentence: Having some of kitten is required more responsibility to fed, to cleaned their litterig box, to poured water into water box.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and fed
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and cleaned
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and poured
Sentence: When you went back to home with tired face, you opened your door and saw that they would have tried to tell you something they feel with theirs language.
Description: A pronoun, possessive is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to theirs and language
Sentence: It was funny that they acted to spoiled to you. they could approaching you and you might laugh with they do.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and spoiled
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present participle or gerund
Suggestion: Refer to could and approaching
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to with and they
Sentence: Another pleasure things, when you played with them, you can used ball and made them to catch the ball.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to can and used
Sentence: Hachiko statue in Japan that show to you for maintain your pets.
Description: The token for is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to for and maintain
Sentence: From my experience, I was addopted some of kitten in my house.
Error: addopted Suggestion: adopted
Sentence: Having some of kitten is required more responsibility to fed, to cleaned their litterig box, to poured water into water box.
Error: litterig Suggestion: littering
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 14 2
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Score: 15 in 30
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 14 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 339 350
No. of Characters: 1427 1500
No. of Different Words: 177 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.291 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.209 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.982 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 75 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 41 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 23 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.95 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.46 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.29 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.502 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.19 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5