Globalization is a normal process for the modern world. Nowadays, there are a lot of people who travel to a foreign country for different purposes. There are a considerable number of people who think that foreigners should comply with the customs and practices of local inhabitants. In my opinion, an individual should only accept those elements of foreign culture which he or she finds acceptable.
Firstly, there are many various folks in the world, and each of them has different culture and practice. Correspondingly, different folks may have opposite thoughts about the same activity. Therefore, people can be stuck between two or more different thoughts while travelling. Although every region has their own religious beliefs and way of living, people should have the freedom to choose the best lifestyle for themselves. This also provides harmony among the different ethnicities living together.
On the other hand, while visiting foreign countries or living abroad, people should try to adapt to the foreign style of wearing, food habits, and other practices if it is not unpleasant for them. It can enlarge their outlook and make them experience new activities. Additionally, it is significant to do research about symbols, gestures, and heritage of inhabitants to avoid unfortunate situations while visiting a foreign country. Furthermore, the admittance of another lifestyle and culture symbolizes respect for the local people and brings up healthy human relations.
To conclude, although it is acceptable to not follow local practice and culture if It does not suit the already existing belief and lifestyle, I partially agree with the idea that people should adapt to the local customs and practices in terms of better relations and experience that people gain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37992831541 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86967650253 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9692127058 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27683346647 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846497084262 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760488812868 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174133134653 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642839744557 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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