Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your country for the first time.
- Tell him the best time of the year to come
- What places they could visit
- Invite them to come to your house
Dear Sam,
How are you doing? Hope the planning for your trip across India is coming along well. I am just writing to you with some suggestions for when you arrive in Mumbai as part of your travel.
I am aware that you plan to spend around six months in india, where you will cover Delhi, Punjab, Hyderabad, Goa, and Mumbai. I would like to advise you to not land here only after the monsoon season is over as it rains very heavily and most of the places are will be shut. The best time to arrive is post November, which is when not only is the weather pleaseant but you will also get to experience festivals such as Diwali and Christmas.
Mumbai has been the financial as well as the arts capital of the country. You can visit various movie sets and if you are lucky, you can catch a glimps of a movie in the making. Other famous sites to visit are the Marine drive and the Sunshine beach. Since they are very close to each other, you can cover both of them in the same day.
I would like to invite you to come stay with us when you are here as my house is perfectly located in the middle of the city and is very close to all these renowend locations. The metro station is also just around the corner and the buses drop you opposite my apartment building. I would love to host you and take you around over the weekend.
I can’t wait to see you! Do let me know the dates once you have booked your tickets.
Best wishes
Karry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, How are you doing? Hope the planning for...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rrive in Mumbai as part of your travel. I am aware that you plan to spend around...
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Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hi, Punjab, Hyderabad, Goa, and Mumbai. I would like to advise you to not land he...
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Line 7, column 441, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...festivals such as Diwali and Christmas. Mumbai has been the financial as well as...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cover both of them in the same day. I would like to invite you to come stay ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d take you around over the weekend. I can’t wait to see you! Do let me know ...
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Line 19, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ates once you have booked your tickets. Best wishes Karry
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Line 23, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oked your tickets. Best wishes Karry
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ickets. Best wishes Karry
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 277.0 206.0 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30324909747 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.96110307466 2.54303337028 77% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57761732852 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8122516213 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4666666667 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93333333333 4.34317383033 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11620734007 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442083709749 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043157842774 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690782262796 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401831063271 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.