There are many types of music in the world today why do we need music Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music

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...ious kinds of music can be seen globally,this is direct result of how people lives ha...
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...le lives have a powerful link with music,which relies on some evident reasons such as ...
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...ficial effect of music on humans stress.Further,it stands to the reason,that both conve...
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...s stress.Further,it stands to the reason,that both conventional music and national mu...
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...th conventional music and national music,which is world wide at present ,have the same...
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...ional music and national music,which is world wide at present ,have the same level of impo...
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...nal music,which is world wide at present ,have the same level of importance.   It...
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...nt ,have the same level of importance.   It is apparent enough,that humans life r...
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... of importance.   It is apparent enough,that humans life require listening to music ...
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...portance.   It is apparent enough,that humans life require listening to music for sev...
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... listening to music for several reasons.The first point to consider is,it is highly...
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...l reasons.The first point to consider is,it is highly proved by scientists through ...
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...sts through some scientific surveys that,listening to our preferred music approximately 15...
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...red music approximately 15 minutes a day,can work as a powerful stress reliever,in o...
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...y,can work as a powerful stress reliever,in other words,alleviating stress is the m...
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...role of listening to music in our lives.Moreover and equally importantly it is definitel...
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...hed through some scientific sources that,listening to music and enjoying the tune as well ...
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...people in pleasant as well as jolly mood,which can help human to appear more creative ...
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...uman to appear more creative day by day.Another significant point to consider is music ...
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...ce of entertainment section of our lives,because it can provide us a chance to exercise ...
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...in a more effective and energetic way.   Clearly the level of importance of both ...
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...ional music is high enough in our world.There is no doubt that traditional music play...
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... countries cultures and as it is obvious,culture is an imperative part of every nations....
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...an imperative part of every nations.thus,preserving the traditional music admittedly is our...
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...esponsibility to perform in our nations.It is also worthy to consider that interna...
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...ve the sense of unity in human beings.   By way of conclusion, we have numerous t...
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...le to fulfi their souls need.furthermore,these two sorts of music,traditional music,wh...
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...eed.furthermore,these two sorts of music,traditional music,which is a culture illustrator ,a...
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...ese two sorts of music,traditional music,which is a culture illustrator ,as well as na...
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...nal music,which is a culture illustrator ,as well as national music are both vital...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24022346369 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54859438103 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522346368715 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.2975951904 350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 251.071782564 49.4020404114 508% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 375.2 106.682146367 352% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.6 20.7667163134 345% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.6 7.06120827912 363% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437486419195 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.281242754888 0.084324248473 334% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895363063486 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312670510937 0.151304729494 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843307790214 0.056905535591 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.1 13.0946893788 299% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.05 50.2224549098 -18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 11.3001002004 285% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.3 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.22 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.1190380762 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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