You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter,
say where you think you left the papers
explain why they are so important
tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Manager,
My name is Shreyas Parab, I have just returned home after having a meeting and delicious lunch in your hotel on 2nd October 2020. On arrival I found that, the file of my project documents I am working on in Nashik is missing. As per my last memory, I might have left on the same table where we were sitting; exactly next to to the window close to the entrance door.
The file is of my cleint in Nashik, and the documents inside are original copy of project site including the original permission letter from the client and governing body for working ahead on the development site. Without those documents, we will not be able to start the construction of the building and get the job done as per schedule. And to get those approval again will take more than one month, which could eventually result in delay as per projected deadline.
I request you to ask the afternoon shift hotel staff, if they have found any document file on the table. If found contact me as soon as possible on +91987654321, so that I can arrange for the pickup of the bunch of important papers.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...returned home after having a meeting and delicious lunch in your hotel on 2nd Oct...
^^
Line 2, column 323, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...ble where we were sitting; exactly next to to the window close to the entrance door. ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 351, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this approval' or 'those approvals'?
Suggestion: this approval; those approvals
...he job done as per schedule. And to get those approval again will take more than one month, wh...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.625 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45520142824 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644230769231 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1199561053 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168834037937 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644424483798 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688087459514 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118008638427 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733014484142 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.