You recently attended a meeting at the hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel, in your letter
+, Say where you think you left the papers
+, Explain why they are so important
+, Tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Manager,
My name is Surbhi Batra. I am highly impressed with the hospitality your staff provided during my stay at your hotel. However, to my misfortunes, I forgot my important documents in your hotel.
I stayed in your hotel room(room no. 1305) for 3 days and last checked out on yesterday only. As far as I remember, i put the papers in the left drawer. But, while checking out, in hurry, I forgot to pick them up.
Next week, I am appearing for an interview. Those documents include my appointment letter for the same. So, i need them immediately. Otherwise, this carelessness of mine can cost me my job.
I shall be very thankful to you if you can send me those papers via courier. My address is house no. 123 ABC road, XYZ. Please, inform me the cost incurred to you on phone. I'll transfer you the payment digitally. I promise you, whenever I'll come back to your city, I'll stay in your hotel. Also, I'll bring a gift for you as a compensation for the inconvenience caused to you.
Looking forward for favourable and prompt reply from you.
Yours Truly,
Surbhi Batra
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n yesterday only. As far as I remember, i put the papers in the left drawer. But,...
^
Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...I forgot to pick them up. Next week, I am appearing for an interview. Those documents inclu...
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Line 4, column 108, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...my appointment letter for the same. So, i need them immediately. Otherwise, this ...
^
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ment digitally. I promise you, whenever Ill come back to your city, Ill stay in you...
^^^
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...u, whenever Ill come back to your city, Ill stay in your hotel. Also, Ill bring a g...
^^^
Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Ill) must be used with a third-person verb: 'stays'.
Suggestion: stays
...henever Ill come back to your city, Ill stay in your hotel. Also, Ill bring a gift f...
^^^^
Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...our city, Ill stay in your hotel. Also, Ill bring a gift for you as a compensation ...
^^^
Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Ill) must be used with a third-person verb: 'brings'.
Suggestion: brings
...city, Ill stay in your hotel. Also, Ill bring a gift for you as a compensation for th...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54871794872 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62204280691 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646153846154 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 16.3608247423 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.529247429 44.8134815571 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 44.35 76.5299724578 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.75 16.8248392259 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.95 4.34317383033 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316474335873 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827667138571 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817254405282 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142955151928 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108358360389 0.0580467560999 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 8.37731958763 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.26 70.7449484536 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.63 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 8.54432989691 66% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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