in some countries the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50 while in others people can work until they are 65 or 70. meanwhile, we see some politicians enjoying power into their eighties. clearly, there is little agreement on an appropriate retirement age.
until what age do you think people should be encouraged to remain in paid employment
Task 2
Retirement age differs society to society in terms of socioeconomic condition. it is an age when every working individual takes break from work and gets paid for the services they have done for their company. Some sociologists believe that having a fixed retirement age for everybody in spite of their occupation is unfair, and certain workers should be allowed to take early retirement. I completely agree with this argument and I will indicate my view with examples.
Age is the prime concern in deciding retirement, meanwhile, it is not the main criterion of ability. In many cases, some 65 or 70 -year-old workers may not work efficiently as they work before, while many workers at this age are sound enough to work better than they used to. The suitability of a position should be a reflection of one’s performance in the job rather than their age. What the employers need to do is to observe their workers performance. Those who are performing poorly may be asked to be retired or to be resigned, but those are yet able to do work efficiently should go on. The organization can be benefited in ways; on the one hand it can have an experience worker and on the other hand it can save money and time on training new employee.
Additionally, remaining in one's job for as long as one is able makes sense as life expectancies increase around the world. As people live longer, they are able to contribute to society in the form of meaningful work. But they are also in need of income for a longer period. A mandatory retirement age of 50 for someone who is statistically likely to live to 79, becomes increasingly difficult to justify. Furthermore, by keeping able workers in paid employment for as long as is possible, public expenditures are less strained. Thus, workers who can still demonstrate their capacity to carry out their work should not be asked to retire simply because they have reached a certain age.
In conclusion, I think age is not a crucial factor for retirement of people. Since the average lifespan and life expectancy has increased, it would be wise to rise retirement age that has two fold impacts on both the individual and the community as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, still, thus, well, while, i think, in conclusion, in many cases, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76902887139 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81605158457 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538057742782 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9743659478 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.944444444 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247362296204 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736136217566 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058239268918 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14605618256 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471101360779 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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