in order to study at university, students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them, so some people think that university education should be free for everyone.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays everything included study at university depends on money. Someone believe that it must be free. I generally agree with this idea and I’ll try to explain my view in this essay.
People think that everything you should pay is better. Although students could access a lot of equipment and sometimes those who are working in the department respect more to them, I disagree because of the right of citizens and providing the same opportunities for all students.
Everyday, the number of people who misses the education because of money are going up and in this situation maybe intelligent person with the new idea cannot afford that; societies lose them. So that the careers fill up with the wrong one or those who do not have enough information and have new idea.
In addition, this is a right when you have paid tax since you worked. When you are paying tax, something like free education, free health insurance with the best conditions are your right and every government must provide them for citizens.
Moreover, the rate of happiness and self-confidence is going up when ones imagine the better future and lifestyle for themselves. Also the depression decrease.
In conclusion, I believe that ones with any situation must use the free education maybe we have a better future without differences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...at university depends on money. Someone believe that it must be free. I generally agree...
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Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...at university depends on money. Someone believe that it must be free. I generally agree...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...e same opportunities for all students. Everyday, the number of people who misses the ed...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...er future and lifestyle for themselves. Also the depression decrease. In conclusion...
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Line 6, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion must use the free education maybe we have a better future without differences...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01369863014 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67616529356 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625570776256 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1849002842 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217709668338 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761277866543 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563281362307 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963671742623 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594320188305 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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