Leisure time
Having a fruitful and relaxing leisure time plays a crucial role in experiencing a healthy lifestyle. People have different approaches toward it, depending on their personalities. I prefer to spend my spare time with a large group of people for some reasons that I am going to explain in the following passage.
For the first thing, the main point of having a leisure time is being distracted from daily life stressors, getting relaxed, and having fun. When I am alone, I cannot help myself with overthinking about the problems I have been dealing with in the current day and/or the week. Unfortunately, being in company with only one or two friends, who are usually my closest ones, makes me to ruminate over the bad experiences I have had along the week, so that I can have their opinions on it. Therefore, I gradually become seriously obsessed with negative thoughts. Then my mood plunges dramatically. So, I need to be around a large group of people to drag me out of the spiral of low mood and negative attitude.
Second, leisure time is the best time for having social interactions. We are always learning life skills through diverse social contacts. Getting exposed to new people and new situations excite our minds and push it to new edges. In the modern era, when the social contacts have the primary and critical influence on our economic success, the best way to become an expert in handling the professional conflicts is having prior practices. Leisure times are secure experiences that keep us fit for dealing with serious social situations. Thus, more people around while spending leisure time is equal to more contacts and higher levels of social preparation.
Finally, spending fun time among a big group of people usually mandates to get out of home and get involved with the world behind the door. It is of utmost importance to sometimes astray from daily routines, especially for me. So, I prefer to meet my friends in outdoor settings, because staying at home makes me depressed.
In conclusion, having a lot of companions in leisure times has many advantages. It helps me to be distracted from whatever makes me anxious, and elevates my mood. I further advance my social skills. Furthermore, it makes me to get out of my cozy apartment and get in touch with the outside world. Therefore, I believe that spending leisure time with a lot of people is much preferable than being alone, or with a small group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, second, so, then, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85371702638 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70448316545 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52757793765 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8400551046 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1304347826 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82608695652 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282375688772 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105384655295 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152656411443 0.0737576698707 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182814568519 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951937642118 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.