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Do you agree or disagree with the following? People will have more leisure time in the future than they do today . Use reasons and examples to support your answer.

Now a days, the world has becoming a fast pace working environment . Daily there are new inventions , new discovery and many new things coming to existence . To be in the league of this constant changing world is one big hell of a task . I personally disagree with the statement that people will have more leisure time in the future than they do today. I feel this way for the two reasons, which I will explain in the subsequent paragraghs.
First of all, the world is now very much competitive than before . As we can witnessed ground breaking discoveries are happening every second . Also technology has advanced so much that any detailed needed is available on the hand by just click of a button. In order to search and bring to the world new things , many geneius mind are working day and night to make it happen . For example : Recently world was hit was covid . So many scientist were working around the clock to save the humanity and bring us vaccines. In matter of few months 2-3 vaccines came into existence . As far as I can remember no vaccine came into existence as quickly as this vaccine came . This is because people worked with all their determination to save the kind rather than spending time in useless things.
Secondly , as the competition has increased , the average grade needed to get into any college has also increased . Earlier people could into their field of choice without any worry and ace in it . Now a days just to get into good college is also a dream . For example: When I was young , I scored 95% in my high school which was well enough to get into medical school at that time . Recently my younger brother got his high school results in which he scored 97% , still he could not get into waiting list also in the medical school . This shows that how much competiative this world has become .
In conclusion, I strongly disagree that people will have more leisure time in the future than they today . It is because of technology and competition in this constantly changing world.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62535211268 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47025925563 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529577464789 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9645339799 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.6363636364 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1363636364 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175072284092 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059443949992 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149456781802 0.0737576698707 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160054304312 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129828866579 0.0645574589148 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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