You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family
for six months and look after their six- year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
- Explain why you would like the job
- give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
- say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you to apply for the position you advertised about in the last issue of the republic newspaper.
I actually live in Tunisia in the moment but I will be moving to Australia next month to complete my studies. Therefore, I want to work for your family to support myself and have a place to live in.
In my opinion, I am the best candidate for the job because I recently graduated as an early childhood teacher and I speak three languages other than English, which are: French, German and Arabic. And I could help your kids to learn new languages. In addition, I adore children and I am very patient with them.
I would like to ask about the work hours and how many days a week because I would like to have the chance to enjoy what Australia could give in my free time.
I included my cv that have my email for further information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
... newspaper. I actually live in Tunisia in the moment but I will be moving to Australia next ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, therefore, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31097560976 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41908772585 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628048780488 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3037265643 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.375 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23119027845 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835528410334 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548267519482 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118104464717 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512406360014 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.