The Pie chart shows how the society is divided by nationallity in Australia and the table illustrates if these people live in cities or Rural Areas. At a Glance most of the people in the australian society were born there and lives in cities.
About the sociery composition, while the 73% of the people living in Australia were born there, the other 27% were born in other countries. The 7% are from UK, 3% from nz, 2% from china, 1% from china and the 14% from other countries.
To higlight about where the people lives in Australia while the Chinese are almost the 100% living in cities (99%) the NZ have the highgest rate of people living in rural areas with a 20%. The second porcentage of people living in rural areas are the autralian with a 20%.
To conclude, the most of the people living in australia were born there and prefer to live in the chities than in the rural areas.
- The Pie chart gives information about the country of birth of people living in Australia and the table shows where people born in these countries live 67
- In some countries people spend long hours at work Why does this happen and it is positive or negative development 73
- Buying things on the Internet such as books air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages 67
- The use of social media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in society Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 78
- Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security But others believe that people cannot always enjoy their jobs and having a permanent job is more important Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48466257669 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26886062944 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466257668712 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2666613727 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.428571429 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408196782842 0.215688989381 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216398665974 0.103423049105 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108584983927 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267927392456 0.15604864568 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921263494239 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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