Since the beginning of the industrial era to the current days, the idea of how more important is job satisfaction than job security have changed. The first group, in favor to job satisfaction, argues that the most of people expend a huge portion of their lifes working,so, being happy there is the only option to be productive and enjoy the life. Otherwise, the second group prefers to see the job just as something neccesary to make them feeling secure and could expend more time in other aspects of their lifes, In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that the work houres are a part of our life, and as any other part, it is important to enjoy it.
To begin takle this situation, let analyze the main arguments that support the satisfaction at job. As we all known, a big portion of the global population expends a huge part of their lifes at work. Therefore, if the aim of someone is about happiness, it is impossible to acept the idea of expending much time in a place without satisfaction. Moreover, there are a lof of studies supporting that working happy is more productive, hence this feeling could help to contribute the self-conviction making you become a better employee and with more chance to have a permanent job.
About the second group, there are two stron possitions that support the idea of that job security is more important. Firstly, some autors have wrritters as Maslow, have written about the importance of security at job, this feeling is the base of all the possible motivation in human life, so if there are not security it is impossible to delight it. Secondly, so many people think that working hours are just something neccesary to have a good time in the rest of their lifes, just a neccesary evil. For both arguments, this goup do not put the satisfaction as something important at job.
To conclude, and for all the aforamentioned arguments, althought some security is allwas really important at jod, the satisfaction could improve the development, making possible the idea to combine both aspects, a permanent and happy job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79831932773 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75380201305 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481792717087 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3014998992 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.75 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416636138087 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159137114901 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953773345468 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263496531739 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897587507809 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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