Life has become much more stressful compared to our parent’s generation. As a result, stress-related illnesses are increasing around the world. Why is stress such widespread in the modern world and what do you think can be done to overcome the problems caused by stress?
In recent times, due to several reasons, the stress among all age groups has surged drastically. The causes, either personal or professional, lead to a vast array of mental health issues. In this essay, I shall discuss these causes as well as the potential solution to cure stress related illnesses.
To begin with, the desire of living an extravagance life and earning fame is one of the fundamental reasons that creates tension among teenagers as well as young adults. This is because, they set high expectations for their future and if they could not achieve their predefined goals, they consider themselves as a failure. Take secondary schools, for example, where students appear for competitive exams to get top university's education. However, those who could not achieve their targets gets depressed and in worst situations, they commit suicide. Moreover, during adulthood, the incompetence to work efficiently than others and family issues due to unhappy marriage are the reasons of stress for adults.
In order to mitigate the issues caused by stress, both individuals and the government have to contribute together. The government should enact rules and regulations for a stress free environment at educational institutes as well as workplaces. In addition, for mental health patients, free counselling should be provided. Every employee should keep proper work-life balance and more emphasis should be given to exercises and games that could benefit them holistically such as meditation or yoga.
To recapitulate, stress can be caused by various reasons which include competition among peers at different stages of life to ensure better life standards and relationship problems. Nevertheless, a combined effort of people and the government for providing a better life quality can help overcome the mental illness and stress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the worst'.
Suggestion: in the worst
...chieve their targets gets depressed and in worst situations, they commit suicide. Moreov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44755244755 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88773088802 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63986013986 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8520175249 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183489010044 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627959668003 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566073696344 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120932480862 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638283231657 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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