People are living longer after they retire. What are the problems? What can be done to solve the problems?
With the harnessing of cutting-edge technology in medical services, pensioners’ health these days are improving greater than ever, which results in prolonging their lifespan. However, this will trigger several unanticipated problems that will be examined in this essay as well as some of the proposed measures.
To begin with, the fact that retired people are able to live longer might bring about a plethora of problems. One of the most irrefutable issues is to put them at high risks of easily contracting the deadly diseases since the immune system deems to deteriorate as time goes by. Take the coronavirus pandemic in Italy as a prime example, this virus has infected and claimed millions of lives which are mostly elderly people. Additionally, what retired people might suffer from living longer is dementia. Vietnam, for instance, the number of retired people with difficulty in memory is growing exponentially due to the lack of brain-involved activities, which has reduced significantly the level of happiness in their lives.
Encouraging retired people to work out frequently and reading newspapers are supposed to be the optimal solutions to address the described problems. First and foremost, what the government should take immediate actions is to urge pensioners to take top priority for doing exercise. This is because doing light exercises on a regular basis, including walking and running, might build up resilience to the immune system, which, in turn, will contribute to the battle against the penetration of bacterias and viruses. In tandem with this, immersing in newspapers regularly is believed to help the retired people to steer clear of memory loss. This is because reading newspapers will facilitate the brain to remain active, providing them with a precious opportunity to better their lives at a ripe old age.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that the lifespan of pensioners tends to last longer in light of the breakthroughs in public healthcare services. Nonetheless, this positive sign might have some unpredictable problems that have detrimental effects on elderly people.
- Online shopping is increasing dramatically How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of jobs required 84
- Some people focus on news in their country while others think it is more important to be aware of international news Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- University education should be free for all students To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- The increase in the number of privately owned cars is having a negative impact on both our towns and the environment What can individuals and the government do to reduce this problem 44
- Nowadays environmental problems are too big for individual countries or people to solve We have reached the stage where we need cooperation on an international level to protect the environment To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ll be examined in this essay as well as some of the proposed measures. To begin with, the...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 267, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... detrimental effects on elderly people.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nonetheless, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3836858006 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93752548239 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592145015106 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3638832704 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.285714286 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196208567481 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697005329516 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749315835973 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104075145194 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459915773919 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.