Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
what are the problems?
what can be done to solve the problems?
Rising numbers of people moving to the city has impact seriously on the environment. However, this can be tackled by offering job opportunities in the countryside.
The main problem caused by overpopulation is pollution. There are countless traffic congestions occurred every day, leading to an increase of carbon dioxide released by cars and motorbikes into the atmosphere. Moreover, in order to meet citizens’ needs, many industries have been built, which increases the amount of greenhouse gases. Also, the water filters of the entire cities cannot work with full of its potential, releasing tons of filthy water into the rivers, lakes, and seas, causing water pollution. As a result, both citizens and nature suffer from the consequences.
Nevertheless, the issues can be addressed by encouraging people to move to rural areas. Most people decide to go to the cities because of jobs lacking or low income. Thus, if organizations invest money in local companies, they can create more jobs with high salaries. With better compensations, the number of people moving to the cities will be naturally reduced. Even more, skilled labour will leave the cities to look for the possibilities of finding jobs and boost the areas’ economy, leading to everyone’s lives enhancement. So, not only can big cities remedy the issues, but the countryside can also benefit from it.
In conclusion, the overpopulated problem is a real threat to the environment, and investing in the development of the countries is a key for this solution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd nature suffer from the consequences. Nevertheless, the issues can be addresse...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29387755102 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00964436166 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1313519299 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6428571429 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1283021186 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490739361168 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676161163651 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811221175302 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356862552651 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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