With the society evolved rapidly, the update of law enforcement is put in a spotlight of debate. There is a opinion that extending the prison sentences can cut the growth of crime while there is other resolutions are being considered. I agree that prolonging the jail punishment can help with decreasing the number of law-violating cases, however, I also believe that there is other alternative methods can help with this problem.
There is a few aspects that longer jail sentence can help with reducing the rate of law offending. Firstly, longer prison period is considered as stricter punishment, it can raise the awareness of law violators before committing any crime. Secondly, with the jail-locked time extended, the portion of crime re-committers kept in the prison for longer. As a result, a massive amount of potential crime caused by them can be controlled. Lastly, the longer that law violators undergoing rehab education of the prison, the better they recognize how extreme the negative effect which created originally by their behaviors can be to the society.
In many cases, other alternative solution can be considered as better choice than prolonging the crime sentence. In a law education aspect, with prisoners who had their rehab lesions inspired them to be better people, longer punishment time is no longer needed since there is no room for improvement. Furthermore, this can create unwanted pressure to gorvenment resource since money is needed to maintain prison facilities for them such as cells and daily meals. Considering social improvement, some violators can be educated just by having them doing rehab activities which contribute to society such as cleaning out the streets or participating in charity programs.
In conclusion, I agreed that extending prisoner punishment can be a beneficial upgrade to law enforcement. However, I also believe that there are better alternative solutions which can be applied in specific cases.
- Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- In some countries fast food restaurants and supermarkets give money to schools to promote their products do you think this is a positive or negative development 89
- The bar chart shows British Emigration selected to destinations between 2004 and 2007 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting and make comparisons where relevant 11
- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences Others however believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Some people think governments should care more about elderly while others think they should focus on investing in education for younger people Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... put in a spotlight of debate. There is a opinion that extending the prison sente...
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Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are other resolutions'?
Suggestion: there are other resolutions
...ences can cut the growth of crime while there is other resolutions are being considered. I agree that prol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30225080386 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92516505619 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527331189711 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0725806294 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.785714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164952344968 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072192643614 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472892974794 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110353549016 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319455355442 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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