you are travelling and someone to do you a favor while you are gone. Write a letter asking a neighbour or friend for help. In your letter : -
where you are going
what the favor is
why you need this friend to help
Dear Ram,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing to see if I could ask a favor. Please allow me to elaborate on my situation.
I am planning to go on a one week trip at Prince Edward Island for my birthday celebration. As this Island is surrounded by warm summer water, has red sandy beaches and lively fun parks will definitely make my birthday special and leave everlasting memories. I just found that when I go there, I won't be able to water the plants which are blooming in my small balcony. I love my plants and have great emotions with them because they are gifted to me by my best friend.
I hope you would not mind watering plants for a week. You know, you are not only my friend but also more like a family member. So I can easily trust you and ask you. I would be so grateful if you could help me out with this situation.
Thank you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...are gifted to me by my best friend. I hope you would not mind watering plants...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 711.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20710059172 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28924503595 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656804733728 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2140670622 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6363636364 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340506539701 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145713300817 0.0766984524023 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118465355643 0.0603063233224 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23377194885 0.12726935374 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152122086886 0.0580467560999 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.