Some people say that music is a good way of bringging people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is true that music has a power to unite and connect people together, regardless of their cultural backgrounds or ages. Personally, I completely agree with this view, and will give my reasons below.
On the one hand, music certainly reach across cultural and national boundaries and bring people together. Taking music of Backstreet Boys band, which is a American renowned boy band, is an example. Their albums are introduced in many versions to audience all over the world. One of their famous show is The Concept for New York city, which had objective to raise fund for AIDS children. This concept was a huge success, both in term of the number of watched people around the world to their impact on international public awareness of protecting children problem. Therefore, I believe that music truly is the global’s language.
On the other hand, music also has ability connect people from different generation. Regardless of ages, people tend to enjoy a memorable melody, a strong rhythm or a beautiful singging voice and music seem to have a magical effect of all of individuals. This would explain why televised music competitions such as “The Voice” or “The X- Factor” are popular prime-time shows. These programs attract incredibly huge audience because songs which are performed in them appeal both childrent and adults. I would argue that no other form of entertainment can bring families together better than this way.
In conclusion, I believe that music is unique in its capacity to create shared experience between people, irrespective of cultures and ages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1511627907 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72461873714 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4569573687 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236794387823 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07548905742 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573116642108 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13411447532 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500208806171 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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