In the last century, transport vehicles are of high significance to meet the requirements of the hectic modern lifestyle. Some people hold the opinion that travel in the cities by car is more beneficial. By contrast, other group of people believes that bicycle is the best vehicle to travel in the cities. To my way of thinking, commuting by both of them has its own advantages and effects.
On the one hand, its undeniable that cars and other vehicles made different aspects of our life much easier and comfortable. Cars are extremely beneficial and useful in terms of fast delivery and effectiveness. Especially role of a car to overcome long travelling distances is indisputable. Additionally, cars are the most comfortable ones among land transports because they are less influenced by external stressful factors. Moreover, when we are travelling by car, we can travel along with our friends and family depending on the car capacity, whereas the maximum capacity of the bicycle is two.
On the other hand, some people may argue that a bicycle is an efficient option to travel in the cities because of various reasons. Firstly, travel by bicycle has physical and health-related advantages. Moreover, cars increase carbon-dioxide emissions in nature, and thus they are a bit dangerous for our planet, whereas bicycles are completely environmentally friendly vehicles. Furthermore, another group of people might be placing importance on using bicycle because of passion to be outside and to feel the nature. Finally, while the car users have to pay some amount of money to fuel price, use of bicycles are totally free of charge.
To conclude, it is undeniable that both sides have their benefits. However, I believe travel by bicycle is more advantageous in terms of human health, nature, and finance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14965986395 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95866755997 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56462585034 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5710761259 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331912806045 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103501799936 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788901499674 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19415127408 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832071361792 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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