People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less.
These days, sugar-based beverages have been gaining popularity. This essay will discuss the factors which is responsible for the increase of sweetened drinks consumption and suggest a number of methods to reduce this trend.
There are two of the biggest reasons why people have consumed a large amount of sugary beverages recently. Firstly, the growth of fast food industry is a root cause of higher intake of sugar-based drinks. In our modern world, most people are too busy to prepare three healthy meals per day, so they often look for quick and convenient solutions and fast food which is usually served with sugary drinks like Coca-Cola or Pepsi are being favored by a large number of people because of their tastiness and convenience. Secondly, another cause of the problem lies in the appearance of several vivid advertisements from various beverage companies aiming at influencing and attracting new customers people, especially the young ones customers. Maybe tThis kind of advertising may have appealed to manipulates children and encourageds them to ask their parentspester their parents for more sugar-based drinks.
However, societies can take steps to mitigate the potential problem. In terms of g Governments, they could impose higher taxes on these products, meaning that their prices would rise, therefore people would be encouraged to cut down on the amount of sugary beverages they take in. Another obvious solution is to enhance public awareness of healthy diet and lifestyle. Perhaps we could recommend that people who have sweetened drinks daily should also alternate them with drink more fruit juice and consume other healthy types of food.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as people are consuming more and more sugar-based drinks such as soft or energy drinks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...Coca-Cola or Pepsi are being favored by a large number of people because of their tastiness and c...
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Line 3, column 792, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'manipulate'.
Suggestion: manipulate
...ind of advertising may have appealed to manipulates children and encourageds them to ask th...
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Line 3, column 883, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir parentspester their parents for more sugar-based drinks. However, societie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29830508475 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67660123983 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0762977047 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.25 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305456510038 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102383276133 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860389948147 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194470575074 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645366428153 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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