Society with good members will make world a better place to live. To build such a society we need to teach children the importance of being good members of society and how it will make their future better.
Two main places where children can be taught about being good members of society are at Home and School.
Home is the first school for children. Parents teach then to walk, speak, listen and read. They teach them to respect elders and how to behave in society. Parents are role models for children. They mimic what their parents do and behave. Teaching good behaviour and correcting their mistakes from an early age will make them good members of society.
School focuses on academics and at the same time teach children how to behave with others. School won't be able to give attention to each child and see if they are following is taught. They cannot force each student to behave good and practice what is taught. Unless it is enforced in school for which they need consent from parents.
Parents who are busy and working don't have time to focus on their child's behaviour. If parents can allocate sometime for their children and teach them how to behave in society, treat everyone as equal, share things and care for one another. By doing this they are building a better future for their child. Therefore I believe that is important for parents to imbibe good habits and behaviour in their children and not rely on school.
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages 56
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- STRESS RELATED ILLNESSES ARE BECOMING INCREASINGLY COMMON WHAT DO YOU THINK ARE THE CAUSES OF THIS WHAT SOLUTIONS CAN YOU SUGGEST 73
- Some people believe that unpaid community service be a compulsory part of high school programs for example working for a charity improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children To what extent do you agree or disagree 36
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , speak
...for children. Parents teach then to walk,speak,listen and read. They teach them to res...
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Line 6, column 190, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e if they are following is taught. They cant force each student to behave good and p...
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Line 8, column 34, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ts. Parents who are busy and working dont have time to focus on their childs beha...
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Line 8, column 307, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ilding a better future for their child. Therefore i believe that is important for parents...
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Line 8, column 317, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...etter future for their child. Therefore i believe that is important for parents t...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir children and not rely on school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75298804781 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26458192529 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513944223108 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.19585357 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1764705882 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7647058824 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76470588235 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270164870915 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987702765687 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592957717047 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176517096328 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436378145972 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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