Some people think that internet and television are very different from each other on the other hand I see many similar points between them. I would like to explain these similarities in this essay.
First of all, there are many things going on all around the world and effect us in many different way hence, we need to keep up with the news. In order to follow the new happenings, announcements and innovations we have to reach the news. Therefore, some of people directly check them on internet while the others watch them on TV. Either this way or that way, we hear from the news and obtain the desired information.
Secondly, there are various of trends on social media and it is inevitable not to be aware of them since we see them on TV or find them on internet. To be a part of those conversations or distract our minds for a moment, we turn on TV or surf on internet.
Lastly, there are countless of films, series therefore, many channels and online platforms to watch any of them. Furthermore, this became a n industry. Because as we know, everyone needs to relax and have some good spare time. In order to spend their leisure time by having fun, many individual prefer to watch videos. So, they watch them on TV or on internet.
As a conclusion, both of them have the similar parts in common and are a way to reach outside of our world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...n all around the world and effect us in many different way hence, we need to keep up with the ...
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Line 2, column 250, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
...s we have to reach the news. Therefore, some of people directly check them on internet while t...
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Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...h any of them. Furthermore, this became a n industry. Because as we know, everyon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 248.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4435483871 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49034295078 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4490169466 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7142857143 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17872245355 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600146090624 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873625442903 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11606793107 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119884031198 0.0645574589148 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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