The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognized as increasing numbers of species come under threat.
What can be done to maintain biodiversity?
Due to the devastating effects of climate change and overexploitation, an increasing number of species have to face risks of being endangered in few next decades. As a result, many scientists and citizens now are more concerned about the crucial role of biodiversity in the Earth’s ecosystems. This essay will suggest several solutions to improve global biodiversity and preserve animals and plants from extinction.
One possible solution is that the Government should establish more natural conservation areas for wildlife, especially endangered species. By building more barriers around these controlled areas, the protection will be far better and wild animals in turn can prevent themselves from potential external danger. Also, in order to provide better protection to these natural reserves, local councils need to give stiffer punishments to indiscriminate logging, hunting or companies exploiting these areas for industrial use. The appearance of more conservation areas would significantly improve the biodiversity and encourage more varieties to accommodate and reproduce.
Another method is that we should celebrate more environmental events to raise the public’s awareness of protecting the wildlife’s natural habitats in rural areas. These events will encourage society to use environmentally-friendly materials and reduce the amount of household waste. With the help of these celebrations, our society will understand and reduce the devastating impact of pollution on the ecosystems, and we can save more endangered species over the world from environmental contamination.
To conclude, the Government should take immediate action on opening more natural reserves to rescue wildlife and protect their natural habitats by informing citizens about the effect of pollution on their survival.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, as for, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92366412214 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33327408995 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606870229008 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0605143919 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.090909091 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161991210004 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624394839973 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491129026679 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947172995035 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655317504572 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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