The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.
What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
In this day and age, with a view to keep pace with the rapid advent of techonology, there has emerged the kind of ePapers. There is no denying that getting access to news online provides a great deal of convenience and costs no money, though such brand new issues start appearing. This essay will look insight the reasons and give out some proposals.
One of the most serious problems is that news on unofficial websites have never been censored, or some individuals even build fake websites of other companies to distribute unconfirmed information. During the peak of the pandemic COVID-19, for instance, an overwhelming amount of false news was posted about new cases and deaths. The cause for this is basically just to attract the public reacting, and satisfies such unacceptable demand for fame. However, posting fake news is not the main cause; that is the way people share what they have read. When one reads news from uncertified sources, they are tend to share it with their friends. That is chiefly how those hoaxes spread uncontrollably and harmfully. One productive solution is for the government to apply heavy punishment on those who invent news, and better the mass sanity in consuming news.
Another issue is piracy: the more the trend of online news keeps rising in popularity, the more paparazi'es are about to hunt. By the time news became common on the Internet, celebrities have been more and more likely to be intruded into their privacy. This is considered as one of the largest concern among European show business. Stars have always been complaining about their personal affairs being invaded illicitly, which then becomes tabloids, gossip and scandals influencing their careers; nonetheless, the government has never done efficient efforts on it. The way forward could be to make a trend to persuade people to boycott illegal news, and the government really need to bring in strict law in order to protect celebrities.
Overall, it is unarguable that news, as well as everything else, applied with hi-tech will benefit considerably, but during the initial period, crime on the virtual world should be watched over. I think the government is in charge of this domain, and required to make a difference on Internet security.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 604, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...news from uncertified sources, they are tend to share it with their friends. That is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, nonetheless, really, so, then, well, for instance, i think, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03753351206 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65025846544 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613941018767 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3690747225 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.529411765 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0963822051391 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0290351744646 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340575361094 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0510571720171 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302330618049 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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