The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed; but; it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet, and what solutions can you suggest?
In the fast-changing digital technology era, the Internet is a means of indispensable connection based on its ways of transforming information for humans. Nevertheless, there are several adverse outcomes that could derive from that, namely, information thief and easily pessimistic data propagation. In this essay, I will discuss these outcomes profoundly as well as mention several solutions that should be adopted to handle this issue.
To begin with, cyberattacks can be considered one of the most significant handicaps for not only private individuals but also internet organizations. Specifically, internet data can be easily thieved by various sophisticated activities of information thieves. When these wrongdoers approach the potential online victims, for example, they can disguise themselves as anyone such as a recruiter for the company you are interested in, or the victim’s closer relatives, for example, to gain their trust. Subsequently, these criminals will perhaps receive an online link or transfer money to bank accounts to take action of accessing and stealing the consumer’s information. It creates an enormous handicap for internet corporations in protecting users from these information thieves, therefore, a possible solution suggested for internet consumers that us sharing less private online information and data on social media foundations. Equally important, users should also modify their passwords periodically to ensure the security and safety of their social network accounts.
Additionally, the descendence phenomenon of negative information also poses a crucial threat to users. This information can be, for instance, fabricated to attract other people’s attention to ruin the reputation of an individual or an organization. This can be widely spread and make users feel puzzled and suspicious, from that, it is impossible for them to distinguish whether this information is accurate or not. Therefore, one considerable solution is individuals should access reputable websites to seek the information that need. To illustrate, if they want to seek job opportunities from their interested companies, they should access companies’ websites or several prestigious recruiting information pages such as Linkedly or TopCV rather than unverified information on social networks. Consequently, they can eliminate their skepticism and strengthen their trust in the information they look up to.
In conclusion, even though the improvement of Internet 5.0G and big data has gradually existed in human lives, the emergence of several negative problems related to the Internet has also appeared. To handle this issue, the protection against the risk of information being hacked or preventing false information from spreading is suggested to address these problems. In the foreseeable future, strict management of information from network operators will also bring security to our data.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 930, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 8.3376753507 360% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2491.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8337236534 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22138447337 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569086651054 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 782.1 506.74238477 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6847932382 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.388888889 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7222222222 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22844130795 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735146570548 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577353778366 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139066045762 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466134037396 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.83 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 78.4519038076 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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