The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the Internet and what solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, it is alarming the way we share information through the Internet has been manipulated, and sometimes inconvenience even happens, while it did not exist before. In this essay, I will scrutinize the most significant issues caused by the Internet and offer some pertinent apartment solutions to tackle this trend.
Foremost among the significant problems involving the internet are cybercrime and hacking. Malicious users exploit the internet to infiltrate personal and government computer networks, stealing sensitive data and wreaking havoc through hacking. Such activities often result in network and device crashes, a trend exacerbated by rapid technological advancement. Additionally, the proliferation of misleading information on various social networking sites has posed a significant challenge. The prevalence of fake identities and misinformation on platforms like Facebook makes it difficult for individuals to discern real connections and verifiable information, leading to adverse effects on mental well-being. Furthermore, the ease of access to explicit content, particularly for impressionable teenagers, is a problem that did not exist in the past, contributing to detrimental societal impacts.
To address these issues, it is imperative to implement stringent regulations and enhance public awareness regarding internet usage for information sharing. One viable solution to combat cybercrime involves emphasizing the use of robust passwords, obtaining cyber insurance, and securing internet connections to bolster cybersecurity. Additionally, preventing the dissemination of misleading information can be achieved by promoting fact-checking and utilizing reputable sources before sharing content on social media. Individuals should be encouraged to validate information from trusted news and government websites to mitigate the propagation of misinformation. Furthermore, ensuring communication safety for children can restrict their exposure to explicit content, emphasizing the need to monitor their online activity and encouraging responsible web browsing habits.
In conclusion, the extensive impact of technological advancements on internet-mediated information sharing has engendered negative repercussions for individuals. Therefore, it is imperative for individuals to exercise caution in both accessing and disseminating information. Moreover, governmental intervention in the form of legislation is crucial to addressing the emerging challenges posed by the internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Message: This word is common for American English. Did you mean 'flat'?
Suggestion: flat
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.3376753507 324% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2179.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 6.48511904762 5.12529762239 127% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54674880466 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.60771543086 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8086874006 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.1875 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222654507887 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656660754223 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521060998212 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131724486402 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368747002989 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 7.86 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.36 12.4159519038 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.15 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 78.4519038076 203% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.