An old friend is coming to town and has invited you to go to the cinema. Write to your friend. In your letter
- Explain that you are unable to come
- Find out how long your friend is staying in town
- Arrange a suitable time to meet
Dear Roya,
Hope you are doing well. Waiting to see you here, remembering the old days. Thank you for your invitation but I am writing to sincerely apologize for not being able to accompany you to go to the cinema.
As you know, during the coming week, I should attend an annual conference of Gas Turbine and I am supposed to present an article. So, unfortunately, I cannot come with you.
If I remember correctly, you have said you are going to stay for a couple of weeks. Please let me know how long you will stay here. So, I can fix my schedule to spend time with each other as much as possible.
I have a good suggestion, if you agree, we can meet each other next Sunday at 06:30 PM at Central Concert hall. Your favorite singer will have a concert on the occasion of his new album release. Let’s go and have some fun.
Can’t wait to see you here!
Take care,
Yalda
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Roya, Hope you are doing well. Waiting to see ...
^^^
Line 11, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Can’t wait to see you here! Take care, Yalda
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3734939759 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34559469791 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674698795181 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5835401152 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.5 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266662771716 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948753195047 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555149422754 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142187917724 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600452145032 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.