you recently attend a meeting at a hotel. when you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
say where you think you left papers
explain why they are so important
tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir. Or Madam;
I am writing with regard to some vital documents that I have left on your hotel last week. One of my colleague and I were at your hotel to have a meeting with our company consultant, Dr. Norbert Cezhc , from 02. Feb till 04.Feb.
My room number was 718 at 4th floor and I think that I forgot to collect all my stuff before check out, since our meeting finished at 11 AM and our flight was at 2PM, so we had to leave the hotel in hurry.
As I mentioned, those paper are considerably important and if any of our opponent access them, a huge amount of our crucial data will be public, which brings a new set of concerns. They include some important information about most of the ongoing projects. Most of them are original test reports and unfortunately, there are not any copy of them.
Now, I am writing to request if you are so kind as to check the room to see if those documents are there or they might collect by cleaning staffs, and send them me as soon as possible.
I hope my request will not inconvenience you too much.
Thank you in advance for your cooperation.
Yours sincerely,
Yalda Asgari.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ur company consultant, Dr. Norbert Cezhc , from 02. Feb till 04.Feb. My room...
^^
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Feb
...r. Norbert Cezhc , from 02. Feb till 04.Feb. My room number was 718 at 4th fl...
^^^
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orbert Cezhc , from 02. Feb till 04.Feb. My room number was 718 at 4th floor and ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as to, i think, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4691943128 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46791443077 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630331753555 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7859724186 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7272727273 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222434399683 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686378921406 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650189354 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120021617775 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500710745493 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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