Write a letter to a friend telling her/him that you are going back to your home town and you want to give him/her some furniture. Please say
- Why you thought about him/her
- Describe the furniture
- Suggest a way for him/her to get it
Dear Roay,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing to inform you that I will move to my hometown in 10 days and now I am organizing my stuff.
As in our last conversation you have said that you are moving to a new house, I thought that it is a good idea to give you some of my furniture which I do not need anymore. Also, I know you have to allocate your income to pay your tuition fees and you are not able to buy these items in near future.
Last year I have bought a new sofa which is really comfortable and stylish. It is quite large and very modern. You can replace your old sofa which needs to be repaired with this. Besides, there is an oven and a coffee maker that I am not going to take them. The coffee maker is made in Italy from a well-known brand.
To carry them, I strongly recommend one of the related organizations who carry the furniture by lorry. The main reason that I suggest them is that not only they use well-trained workers but also they insure your furniture against potential damages.
I hope this information will be some of assistance.
Best Wishes,
Yalda.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28229665072 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38930907911 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602870813397 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6386452694 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8461538462 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177040453127 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522490452033 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559281451554 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881273616498 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654840517188 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.